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Fiction

This Time Last Year

By Magdaléna Platzová
Translated from Czech by Alex Zucker
Magdaléna Platzová tells of love (and life) lost.

Several times that night I forgot her name and she had to repeat it to me. It wasn’t that I didn’t care. The reason her name kept slipping my mind was because I had to pay such close attention to what she was saying in order not to get tripped up by her string of rapid questions. She was excited, but not over-the-top. She didn’t linger on any one subject but just kept moving forward nonstop, hopscotching from one important topic to the next.

The pub we were in was dark and smoky and her bare arms in her sleeveless dress looked unbelievably white. Like they were absorbing light and re-releasing it through a velvety filter of white. In those French novels of yours, they called arms like that alabaster. She didn’t even try to pretend that she sat next to me just by accident. Why not? That’s the first thing I don’t understand. When I realized she was interested in me, given how unlikely that was, my first thought was maybe she was confusing me with somebody else. There were a lot of people there, including men who were younger and more attractive than I am. There were plenty of chairs free, she could have sat wherever she wanted. Just to explain: Tomáš had invited me to a private screening of a short film I had acted in. Are you laughing? I’m exaggerating when I say “acted.” More like “stood around.”

Tomáš is still the same guy you knew, faithful to his artistic principles. He shot me from behind, standing in front of a window. My hunched back, shadowed in black, framed by the bright rectangle of the window, emanated loneliness. Maybe that’s what attracted her? A somber figure in a room with a high ceiling and cold walls. Is existentialism back in fashion? I’m not sure. Maybe it wasn’t me she was interested in, but conversation as such, the activity known as talking.

She moved closer to me over the course of the evening, turning her chair, leaning in, touching me with her hand and her dull-stockinged knee.

She left her phone number on the table when she left.

I can tell you’re laughing again. There’s only one thing on your mind, obviously, and you don’t understand my hesitation and awkwardness. But do you still remember the days when we—you, me, and our friends—considered conversation an activity it was worth getting together for? The exchange of words was vitally important to us. When we talked we had the feeling we were making great discoveries. Could it be possible that this girl wants to see me just so we can keep talking?

Alabaster Lucie burst into my life with her questions and found me unprepared. I had to hold back my sneers, my laughter, my sarcasm, so I could be as serious as she was. But it made me feel awkward and shy. While she threw herself fully into her words, I was always hiding something.

It was after midnight when I left the pub. I decided to walk home. Shadows flickered along the walls and the sidewalks, clouds scudded across the moon. I remembered how you used to love windy nights like this and that it had been exactly a year. I started to talk to you.

Having a conversation with a young, intelligent girl is both refreshing and depressing, I said. Because there’s no way she could ever really understand me without finding me disgusting. That isn’t just my insecurities talking—you know me. I don’t think I’m any worse than anybody else, I just mean that once we get to a certain age, unless we’re really careful, we’re all lame in the eyes of the young, bright, beautiful people. The older you are, the less exposure you can tolerate.

Disguise and manipulation, then, were the only way I could keep having conversations with Lucie, feeding off her youth while only sharing the parts of myself that I consider appropriate. She might not figure it out, but wouldn’t that take too much work? Yes, work!

I’m sure she sees it differently. If I don’t call her after tonight, she’ll think it’s because I’m afraid of what might happen. When the truth is, I’m afraid the only thing that might happen is nothing.

“Still, it’s worth a try, though, isn’t it?”

I asked myself as if I were you. I do that pretty often when I’m drunk.

“Don’t you get it? I’m afraid she won’t want to sleep with me.”

There’s one thing I wanted to ask you about:

Do you remember when you, me, and the rest of our friends stopped talking seriously? At what point did we start making light of everything, including ourselves? Since when did we stop being able to use certain words without irony? I attempted to do it tonight, sincerely, in spite of how awkward it felt. Then I noticed that Lucie was paying excessively close attention to me. As if I were an alien from some other planet and she was trying to understand me because she might learn something from it, do you know what I mean? Her open mouth and inclined torso, every inch of her matte white body expressed the effort she was making. I felt very alone.

I thought of you.

Of how it was this time last year that you walked out of the flat and locked the door behind you. Started down that familiar staircase, but at one point, on the landing, instead of continuing on your way, you opened the window and jumped.

I like to imagine that the window was already open. That it was low and big, so you could step through it easily, like a door. I’d like to see your death as a spontaneous act. But does anything happen as straightforwardly as a thought?

First you had to set your worn leather satchel down on the ground. Then turn the handle and yank it with all your strength. You had to climb onto the sill, which was rotting. Maybe your foot slipped and you had to try again. Did you take off your glasses? I’m sure you at least considered it.

You know, I realize now, those bumps, bends, and snags, and the weariness that comes with them, those are what I hid from Lucie.

“Vloni touhle dobou,” from the short story cycle Recyklovaný muž © 2008 by Magdaléna Platzová. By arrangement with the author. Translation © 2014 by Alex Zucker. All rights reserved.

English Czech (Original)

Several times that night I forgot her name and she had to repeat it to me. It wasn’t that I didn’t care. The reason her name kept slipping my mind was because I had to pay such close attention to what she was saying in order not to get tripped up by her string of rapid questions. She was excited, but not over-the-top. She didn’t linger on any one subject but just kept moving forward nonstop, hopscotching from one important topic to the next.

The pub we were in was dark and smoky and her bare arms in her sleeveless dress looked unbelievably white. Like they were absorbing light and re-releasing it through a velvety filter of white. In those French novels of yours, they called arms like that alabaster. She didn’t even try to pretend that she sat next to me just by accident. Why not? That’s the first thing I don’t understand. When I realized she was interested in me, given how unlikely that was, my first thought was maybe she was confusing me with somebody else. There were a lot of people there, including men who were younger and more attractive than I am. There were plenty of chairs free, she could have sat wherever she wanted. Just to explain: Tomáš had invited me to a private screening of a short film I had acted in. Are you laughing? I’m exaggerating when I say “acted.” More like “stood around.”

Tomáš is still the same guy you knew, faithful to his artistic principles. He shot me from behind, standing in front of a window. My hunched back, shadowed in black, framed by the bright rectangle of the window, emanated loneliness. Maybe that’s what attracted her? A somber figure in a room with a high ceiling and cold walls. Is existentialism back in fashion? I’m not sure. Maybe it wasn’t me she was interested in, but conversation as such, the activity known as talking.

She moved closer to me over the course of the evening, turning her chair, leaning in, touching me with her hand and her dull-stockinged knee.

She left her phone number on the table when she left.

I can tell you’re laughing again. There’s only one thing on your mind, obviously, and you don’t understand my hesitation and awkwardness. But do you still remember the days when we—you, me, and our friends—considered conversation an activity it was worth getting together for? The exchange of words was vitally important to us. When we talked we had the feeling we were making great discoveries. Could it be possible that this girl wants to see me just so we can keep talking?

Alabaster Lucie burst into my life with her questions and found me unprepared. I had to hold back my sneers, my laughter, my sarcasm, so I could be as serious as she was. But it made me feel awkward and shy. While she threw herself fully into her words, I was always hiding something.

It was after midnight when I left the pub. I decided to walk home. Shadows flickered along the walls and the sidewalks, clouds scudded across the moon. I remembered how you used to love windy nights like this and that it had been exactly a year. I started to talk to you.

Having a conversation with a young, intelligent girl is both refreshing and depressing, I said. Because there’s no way she could ever really understand me without finding me disgusting. That isn’t just my insecurities talking—you know me. I don’t think I’m any worse than anybody else, I just mean that once we get to a certain age, unless we’re really careful, we’re all lame in the eyes of the young, bright, beautiful people. The older you are, the less exposure you can tolerate.

Disguise and manipulation, then, were the only way I could keep having conversations with Lucie, feeding off her youth while only sharing the parts of myself that I consider appropriate. She might not figure it out, but wouldn’t that take too much work? Yes, work!

I’m sure she sees it differently. If I don’t call her after tonight, she’ll think it’s because I’m afraid of what might happen. When the truth is, I’m afraid the only thing that might happen is nothing.

“Still, it’s worth a try, though, isn’t it?”

I asked myself as if I were you. I do that pretty often when I’m drunk.

“Don’t you get it? I’m afraid she won’t want to sleep with me.”

There’s one thing I wanted to ask you about:

Do you remember when you, me, and the rest of our friends stopped talking seriously? At what point did we start making light of everything, including ourselves? Since when did we stop being able to use certain words without irony? I attempted to do it tonight, sincerely, in spite of how awkward it felt. Then I noticed that Lucie was paying excessively close attention to me. As if I were an alien from some other planet and she was trying to understand me because she might learn something from it, do you know what I mean? Her open mouth and inclined torso, every inch of her matte white body expressed the effort she was making. I felt very alone.

I thought of you.

Of how it was this time last year that you walked out of the flat and locked the door behind you. Started down that familiar staircase, but at one point, on the landing, instead of continuing on your way, you opened the window and jumped.

I like to imagine that the window was already open. That it was low and big, so you could step through it easily, like a door. I’d like to see your death as a spontaneous act. But does anything happen as straightforwardly as a thought?

First you had to set your worn leather satchel down on the ground. Then turn the handle and yank it with all your strength. You had to climb onto the sill, which was rotting. Maybe your foot slipped and you had to try again. Did you take off your glasses? I’m sure you at least considered it.

You know, I realize now, those bumps, bends, and snags, and the weariness that comes with them, those are what I hid from Lucie.

“Vloni touhle dobou,” from the short story cycle Recyklovaný muž © 2008 by Magdaléna Platzová. By arrangement with the author. Translation © 2014 by Alex Zucker. All rights reserved.

Vloni touhle dobou

Několikrát za večer jsem zapomněl její jméno a musela mi je zopakovat. Ne proto, že mi byla lhostejná. Její jméno mi vypadávalo z hlavy, protože jsem příliš bedlivě sledoval, co říká, otázky, které mi chvílemi kladla tak rychle za sebou, jako by mě chtěla nachytat. Byla dychtivá, ale ne zbrklá, netrvala na svém, ale nepřetržitě se pohybovala vpřed, přeskakovala na další a další témata, která jí připadala důležitá.

V hospodě, kde jsme seděli, bylo šero a kouř a její paže byly neuvěřitelně bílé v šatech bez rukávů. Zdálo se, že pohlcují světlo a potom je propouštějí zpět hebkým filtrem běloby. V tvých francouzských románech se o takových pažích psávalo: alabastrové. Sedla si vedle mne a nepředstírala, že jenom náhodou. Proč? První věc, které nerozumím. Když jsem si uvědomil její zájem o mne a nepravděpodobnost toho zájmu, napadlo mě, jestli si mne s někým nespletla. V místnosti bylo hodně lidí a mezi nimi rozhodně přitažlivější a mladší muži, než jsem já. Bylo dost volných židlí, mohla si vybrat. Abych ti vysvětlil: Tomáš mě pozval na soukromé promítání krátkého filmu, ve kterém jsem hrál. Směješ se? „Hrál říkám s nadsázkou. Spíš jsem staticky pobýval.

Tomáš je pořád, jak jsi ho znal, věrný svým uměleckým zásadám. Snímal mne proti oknu a zezadu, z mých černých nahrbených zad zarámovaných světlým obdélníkem okna čišelo osamění. Mohl jsem ji tim zaujmout? Těžká postava umístěná v prostoru s příliš vysokým stropem a chladnými zdmi. Je zase v módě existencialismus? Nejsem si jistý. Možná její zaujetí vůbec nepatřilo mně, ale rozhovoru jako takovému, činnosti nazvané mluvení.

Během večera se přibližovala, natočila si židli, nakláněla se, dotýkala se mne rukou a kolenem v matné punčoše. Když odcházela, nechala na stole svoje telefonní číslo.

Zas vidím, jak se směješ. Napadá tě samozřejmě jen jedna věc a nerozumíš mému váhání a mým rozpakům. Ale vzpomínáš ještě, jak jsme kdysi my – ty, já a naši přátelé, považovali rozmlouvání za činnost, kvůli níž stálo za to se scházet? Výměna slov pro nás bývala životně důležitá, měli jsme pocit, že během rozhovorů děláme ty největší objevy. Bylo by možné, že ta dívka se se mnou chce vidět jen proto, abychom pokračovali v mluvení?

Alabastrová Lucie na mne vtrhla se svými otázkami a našla mne nepřipraveného. Musel jsem se násilím držet, abych se nepoškleboval, nesmál, neironizoval, abych byl stějně vážný jako ona. Ale při té vážnosti jsem si připadal trapný a styděl jsem se. Zatímco ona do svých slov vstupovala celá, já jí vždy něco zamlčel.

Z hospody jsem vyšel po půlnoci. Rozhodl jsem se jít domů pěšky. Po zdech domů a po chodnících kmitaly stíny, přes měsíc spěchaly rychlé mraky. Vzpomněl jsem si, jak jsi míval takové větrné noci rád, a že je to právě rok. Začal jsem s tebou hovořit.

Rozhovor s mladou inteligentní dívkou, říkal jsem ti, je velmi osvěžující a zároveň bezútěšný. Je totiž nemožné doufat, že by mě někdy mohla úplně pochopit, aniž bych se jí zošklivil. To ze mne nemluví komplexy, vždyť mne znáš. Nepřipadám si o nic horší než druzí, jen chci říct, že od jistého věku jsme v očích mladých, krásných a bystrých lidí ubozí všichni, pokud si nedáme pozor. Každý věk snese jinou míru odhalení.

Pokračovat s Lucií bych tedy mohl jen za cenu zastírání a manipulace. Směl bych se přiživovat na jejím mládí a sám ze sebe ukazovat jen to, co pečlivě vyberu a uznám za vhodné. Asi by mi na to nepřišla, ale nebylo by to příliš namáhavé? Ano, namáhavé!

Ona to pochopí jinak. Jestli jí po dnešním večeru nezavolám, bude si myslet, že mám strach z toho, co by se mohlo stát. A já naopak mám strach z toho, že by se nemohlo stát vůbec nic.

„Ale za pokus by to stálo, ne?“

Ptal jsem se sám sebe, jako bych já byl ty. Dělávám to docela často, když jsem opilý.

„Ty to nechápeš? Bojím se, že se se mnou nechce milovat.“

Chci se tě zeptat na jednu věc:

Připomeneš mi, kdy jsme ty, já a naši přátelé přestali mluvit vážně? V které fázi jsme začali zlehčovat všechno, včetně nás? Odkdy jsme nedokázali bez ironie vyslovit určitá slova? Já se o to dnes večer znovu pokusil, upřímně, navzdory trapnosti. A všiml jsem si, že ta dívka, Lucie, mě poslouchala nějak příliš pozorně. Jako bych byl cizinec přicházející z jiné planety a ona se mě snažila pochopit, protože to pro ni mohlo být poučné, rozumíš? Její pootevřená ústa a nachýlený trup, celé to matné bílé tělo vyjadřovalo snahu. Cítil jsem se velice sám.

Myslel jsem na tebe.

Jak jsi vloni právě touhle dobou vyšel z bytu a zamkl za sebou dveře. Dal ses dolů známým schodištěm, ale v jednu chvíli, na odpočívadle, místo toho, abys pokračoval v cestě, jsi otevřel okno a skočil.

Rád si představuju, že to okno bylo otevřené. Že bylo nízké a velké, takže jsi jím mohl projít pohodlně jako dveřmi. Tvoji smrt bych chtěl chápat jako spontánní čin. Ale děje se něco s přímostí myšlenky?

Nejdřív jsi musel na zem odložit svou koženou ohmatanou tašku. Potom otočit kličkou a vší silou jí trhnout. Musel jsi vylézt na rám, který byl zpuchřelý. Možná ti sklouzla noha a ty ses pokusil znovu. Sundal sis brýle? Jistě jsi tu možnost alespoň uvážil.

Víš, teď mě napadá, že právě tyhle hrboly, okliky a zadrhnutí a také ta velká únava z nich jsou tím, co jsem Lucii zamlčel.  

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